Category of Photography:

Portrait photography

The Critique:

Great job in lighting the subject.

Make sure that objects like the vertical bars, do not  line up with the subject's head.  It makes the things coming out of her head.

Keep  it up.

 

Critique By Inna Sumra, Professional Photographer in Fargo North Dakota.
M. A. in Photography, Cr. Photog., M. Photog., ARPS (UK).