Improve My Photography
Category of Photography:
Portrait photography
The Critique:
Good story telling image.
Ask the subject not to put the hand in front of his face.
The grass is oversaturated.
You can see some of my work at the link below. It may serve as inspiration.
Critique By Inna Sumra, Professional Photographer in Fargo North Dakota.M. A. in Photography, Cr. Photog., M. Photog., ARPS (UK).