Category of Photography:

Fine Art / Graphic Illustration

The Critique:

Make sure that all the watch and the bracelet is in sharp focus.

You may want to use focus stacking, if you have Adobe Photoshop.

Check up the tutorial on focus stacking.

That will help you.

Critique By Inna Sumra, Professional Photographer in Fargo North Dakota.
M. A. in Photography, Cr. Photog., M. Photog., ARPS (UK).